50 Successful University of California Application Essays

This reference focuses on how to write the scholarship application essay that will get you into one of the branches of the University of California. Not quite as easily accessible as other guides by the Tanabes, this is very definitely aimed at a different audience. The book begins with a chapter called “25 Essay Mistakes that Guarantee Failure,” followed by a question and answer chapter that has UC admissions officers responding to questions. The next 15 or so chapters include essays about different topics, such as literature, family, challenges, and more. Each essay is followed by an analysis which offers an excellent critique and pointers on what to do and not do. The last two chapters are full of advice on topics and writing from University of California students. Traditionally, there have not been many students in my building applying to UC schools, but the lessons in this guide should apply to any four year university.

Zen and Xander Undone

Zen (Athena) and Xander (Alexandria) are trying to deal with the death of their mother, with no help from their father who has withdrawn from his family and the world. Zen buries herself in her karate training and instruction; Xander, who has always been somewhat of a wild child, is now on a path of total destruction. One day, the girls receive a letter from their mother, which promises that there will be more letters and packages to come. What also arrives is a mystery. The girls find out that their mother had a secret, and since she isn’t there to ask, they decide to find out on their own. However, the closer they get to an answer, the less certain they are that they want to know.

The sisters are realistic and believable; their struggle to deal with their grief rings true. The supporting characters are interesting; it is a shame that their father is so crippled with grief that he is just a side character. There is some language and quite a bit of objectionable behavior; however, it is not gratuitous. It is Xander’s way of dealing with her grief and quite understandable, if misguided.

Definitely for grades 9+.

The Case of the Vanishing Honeybees: A Scientific Mystery

What is killing all the bees?  In 2006, beekeepers were horrified to discover that high percentages of their honeybee populations were dying out.  Here, Markle discusses the many theories about what could be killing the bees, and along the way, readers learn much about the beekeeping industry, the importance of bees in the larger ecosystem, and life inside a bee’s colony.  The informative text is laid out on large pages, accompanied by close-up photos of bees and other relevant images.  Although the presentation of the information is accessible enough for elementary school students, the complexity of the problem of the bee disappearance is plain.  Markle is a master at communicating information in a clear and engaging way.  This is an important, well-presented introduction to the problem of bee depletion – one which will educate future adults about the high stakes of this looming danger.

Scare Scape

The Gristle Grunt, the Ink Blight, the Two-Headed Mutant Rodent, the Shark Hound – these are just a few of the monstrous creatures featured in Morton’s story.  It begins innocently enough – a family finds a statue which grants three wishes.  Dark magic and the blind former owner of their new home are at the root of the trouble.  Fisher’s story feels like a slightly more sophisticated heir to the Goosebumps series.  At the center of the bound volume are pages printed with information about and images of creatures from “The Monster Deck.”  This title will appeal to kids looking for adventures and monster goodness – although they may be sorry that they must look at the website for the book to see the monsters in color.  Each of the three siblings involved in the story have their own character arcs, as they each cope with personal tragedy and supernatural happenings in different ways.  At nearly 300 pages, this title is hefty, and will be a fun challenge for monster-obsessed readers.

Code

Tory and her friends have mutated animal DNA which gives them special powers and a “pack” mentality. They will need all these powers to survive the “Game,” a challenge they found in a geocache. It is only as they solve first one challenge and then the next that they realize that the “Gamemaster” is not a fellow geocacher, and the game is anything but a game. The Gamemaster has planted a bomb that will go off if the four friends cannot solve the clues.

I have not read the first two books in the series, but I was able to follow  the storyline although I think I would have enjoyed it more if I had had more background. The pack is a lot like Maximum Ride’s flock, but there is more suspense than science fiction in the story. The plot moves quickly in spots, less quickly in others. There is one ongoing subplot that is impossible to make sense of without having read the first two books, but I still enjoyed this one. Fans of Maximum Ride and Alex Rider should enjoy this series.

Pro Stock

Pro Stock motorcycles are custom built for racing.  They are similar to street bikes but have more powerful engines, light weight tubular steel frames, and an aerodynamic chassis.  Bikes reach upwards of 195 mph and races end is less than 7 seconds.  The front wheel is for steering, the rear one is larger (10″ wide) to provide maximum grip on the track.  A “wheelie” bar prevents the bike from flipping.  Riders wear padded leather suits, gloves, boots, and a helmet for protection.  Xtreme Fact boxes state additional facts such as the tires only last about 8 drag strip runs and that acceleration force is similar to the lift off of the space shuttle!  Several racers are mentioned with their statistics.  A glossary is in the back but the words are not indicated within the text.  An index is also included.  Photographs show details on the bikes as well as action during a race.  Those attracted to sport bikes will be drawn to this series.

Indy Car Racing

Indy cars are wide, flat, use the latest technology, and can reach speeds upwards of 200 mph.  They run on ethanol, a biofuel made from corn and sugar cane.  High speeds cause the tires to get extremely hot which helps hold them to the track.  Drivers must wear fire-resistant protective suits which cover them from head to foot.  Races are held around the world on speedways or street courses.  The race positions for the 33 drivers are determined by the highest qualifying speeds.  These are just some of the facts presented in this book of these amazing cars.  The famous Indianapolis 500, first run in 1911, will take two days and cover 500 miles (200 laps).  Fans will recognize names of a few drivers mentioned.  A labeled photo shows specific parts of a race car.  Photos are well chosen to support the large text.  Highlighted text is defined on the page as well as in the glossary.  Fast Fact boxes provide additional interesting facts.  A glossary, books for further reading, an index, and an internet site are included in the back.  The publisher website also provides additional games and projects.  Those attracted to race cars will be drawn to this series.

The Kurds

This reference presents essays that discuss not only the historical background of the Kurds, but also the actions against Kurds in modern Turkey and Iraq. The first chapter provides the background information, including information on the Turkish Settlement Law and the actions of Saddam Hussein against Kurds. Chapter two presents essays about several controversies, such as whether Hussein’s actions constituted genocide, whether the Kurds should be granted an independent state, whether Turkish actions against Kurds constitute genocide and more. The third chapter recounts personal experiences, such as a Turkish American Kurd who was tortured in Turkey, a Kurdish politician’s first impressions of Hussein in his early days of power, and others who experienced atrocities at the hands of Hussein and his forces. I don’t think many of our students know about the persecution of Kurds, and I think fewer understand the root of the problems; this book does a good job explaining it. There are exercises at the start of each chapter, including analysis of data and political cartoons, writing prompts and group activities. The reference includes a timeline, maps, and lists of websites and books for further information.  I see this as an excellent addition to a high school library, both for students looking for more information on genocide or teachers interested in developing a lesson/unit on the topic, particularly one supported by primary source documents.

The Story of Owen: Dragon Slayer of Trondheim

Siobhan lives in Canada, a Canada in an alternate world where dragons and people compete for living space, food and fuel. The fossil fuels people depend on are the food that sustains the dragons. Owen, a dragon-slayer-in-training, and his family of dragon slayers move to Siobhan’s small town and life changes for everyone. Siobhan is musically talented but not very outgoing. When Owen’s family asks her to become his bard, she is thrown into a world about which she knows much less than she thought.

The world building in this debut novel was detailed but not intrusive; you don’t have to keep track of intricate worlds and maps and politics to follow the story. But it is the relationships that make this story. Siobhan and Owen become friends; there is no deep romance here. Family relationships are strong realistic. Even the secondary characters are well-drawn. Owen, Siobhan, their parents and friends all have to decide what they are willing to sacrifice to keep their land free and safe; their actions and decisions make for powerful reading. Readers who love the Brotherband Chronicles and the newer United States of Asgard series will enjoy this book.

Dance Team Dilemma

Hannah and Caitlin are best friends and decide to try out for a place on the dance squad at school.  Caitlin is naturally athletic and the moves come easily to her.  Hannah struggles with the moves but wants to do well.  When Caitlin wants to go shopping or hang out with a boy, Hannah is torn.  She wants to be friends with Caitlin, but she also wants to practice and get better at the routines.  She chooses practicing over spending time with her best friend.  After their friendship suffers some rocky moments, it pays off.  Hannah got a solo spot on the dance teams and Caitlin returns to being a good friend.  The story line is predictable but the main focus of being true to one’s self and practicing to accomplish a goal is strong.  Included in the back of the book with a paragraph about the author and illustrator, is a glossary, discussion questions, writing prompts, and descriptions of four styles of dance – ballet, tap, hip-hop, and jazz.