
Review of Just Another Epic Love Poem
I bolded the spoilers below.
What I liked:
- The characters are generally realistic and compelling. I was immediately invested in Bea and Mitra’s story.
- The poems sprinkled throughout the book are lovely, but also feel like they could be written by high school girls.
- The food. Don’t read this on an empty stomach. It’s full of enthusiastic descriptions of Iranian food like tadig, zoolbia, and chai tea.
What I didn’t like:
- Every character makes rushed decisions. It’s unrealistic and frustrating. Characters take a few minutes or seconds to decide to forgive someone, trust someone, or drive across the state with someone.
For instance, Mitra misses an important event because of a family emergency. She arrives late at the party afterwards and sees Bea with her ex (Bea’s ex). Bea ignores her because she missed the event. So Mitra goes home and destroys something important to both of them. Her girlfriend is devastated but quickly forgives her. None of this would have happened if any of the characters had not been so quick to judge, and no one reflects on that at all. It’s just, oh, you burnt something I cared about but I don’t care why, let’s just kiss and be friends.
This mostly comes at the end of the novel and wouldn’t have annoyed me so much if the characters hadn’t been realistic and sympathetic up to that point.
THS 11th grader